Lady of Fire

Hi all! I am happy say that I am back and I apologize for being away for forever. I am rewriting this, due to the fact my writing has gotten ...

I never thought it would happen. Never. I thought I would forever be stuck with my mistake and forever be doomed to remember it was my fault. My one else's. ...

Most people said what I was going to say. Darn, but at the say time yay! More nice and praising for you! :D I love this piece, you grab the ...

Prologue The night was dark and the clouds covered the moon. Street lamps illuminated the sidewalk and the young man that walked beneath them. Cars tumbled past, the only sounds ...

Well, most people got what I was going to say. All and all, this was a good piece that I'm sure many people can relate with. Great job. :D

I really like this. It is well written and interesting to read. Just one suggestion though. Try to make the news that Jay was going to break up with her ...

I really like this story. It is very interesting and a fun read. I greatly enjoyed it. It is defiantly unique and I like it a lot.

This is a touching story. I am sorry however, to hear that it is true. Break ups are hard and sometimes you still hurt. However, writing like this is a ...

Wow, didn't see that coming. Defeinatly a surpise but I liked it. You kept the reader interested and could relate to your character. And I must say, I love the ...

I like this story. I love how she talks to Oliver only for the reader to find out she was talking to his grave. Very creative. I would however, would ...

Back...for now...and all I want to do is punch a wall. Let blood be shed...and my vengnce be swift and silent. But my heart aches, with sadness and fear And ...

Why does everything have to be so damn difficult? Why does everything always fall apart? Why is the world such a fucking mess? Why do we leave it the way ...

Oh my gosh, you brought me to tears! I'm whipping tears off my keyboard right now! This was a very good story and I could easily seeing this in a ...

Chapter 3: The Birth; 19 years ago A cry ran from the birthing room from the lungs of a strong baby girl that had unfortunately been brought to life under ...

Thank you all for the critique. I hope you will read chapter 1 and chapter 2 ^^